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Have I gotten too picky?

  • May. 20th, 2012 at 12:44 AM
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Wow, I never update this anymore..,

Anyway, I've been wondering about this issue lately, so I figured I'd dump it here in my journal...not like more then one person reads it anyway, not that I mind, looking at some of these old posts...

So, I read a lot of fanfiction, to the point where I can't help but wonder if I've become a bit too accustomed to the best stuff out there, since it can take only the slightest out-of-character word before I find myself going back to the archives to find another...

A good example of this, I guess, would be something I've noticed, which i've named 'the eloquence issue'...this is an occasional issue where a writer seems to put such effort into their descriptions (a good thing), to the point that it actually seems to start leaking into how the characters talk (not always a good thing).
For example, I was reading a fic lately involving two characters from a show, a southern girl, and a young assistant...it was well-written, no doubt about it, but the way the characters spoke was FAR too fancy, considering their personalities, and it made it really hard to keep reading.

However, this fic has gotten great reviews, and none of them seem to point out this issue, so I do have to wonder...is it possible that I've gotten so used to the awesome fics, that I've become a bit of a snob in terms of quality? I'm sure stuff like this never used to bother me, but now I can barely keep reading when I see these issues.

It's something I'll have to ponder on...

Oh, also, before I go, apologies for the rather disjointed typing style...writing this from an iPod, and it's kinda hard to remember what I already said when I can barely see the screen as it is...

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Ghost Trick: *Spoiler* Detective

  • Sep. 1st, 2011 at 10:56 PM
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So, I just finished playing an INCREDIBLY awesome game! It's for the DS, and it's called 'Ghost Trick: Phantom Detective'.
It was done by the same guy who did the superb Ace Attorney series of games, so theres a great plot, clever twists, challenging puzzles and gameplay, and all the good stuff you'd want from a DS game.
Helll, I liked the plot so much, I HAVE to talk about it! But don't worry, I'll spoil tag it all so you can still enjoy it for yourself.

You play as a *Spoiler* named *Spoiler* who wakes up *Spoiler* in a *Spoiler* with a *Spoiler* and *Spoiler* standing over his *Spoiler*. He has *Spoiler* that allow him to *Spoiler* and *Spoiler* thanks to *Spoiler* *Spoiler* *Spoiler* and *Spoiler*.
You need to find out who *Spoiler* *Spoiler* and also *Spoiler* in *Spoiler* *Spoiler* before you *Spoiler* !
over the game, you find out that you *Spoiler* *Spoiler* *Spoiler* and *Spoiler* *Spoiler* who you *Spoiler* was *Spoiler* is actually *Spoiler* and *Spoiler* *Spoiler* *Spoiler* *Spoiler* all *Spoiler* *Spoiler*

Then *Spoiler* is *Spoiler* *Spoiler* *Spoiler* *Spoiler* *Spoiler* *Spoiler* doggy *Spoiler* *Spoiler* *Spoiler* *Spoiler* *Spoiler* *Spoiler* *Spoiler* years ago and *Spoiler* *Spoiler* *Spoiler* *Spoiler* *Spoiler* *Spoiler* !!!


*GREAT BIG FUCKING SPOILERS*

And thats the game in a nutshell!  Go out and buy it! Seriously!

Little update to the journal

  • May. 9th, 2011 at 10:56 AM
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Note to anyone starting a LJ, don't make it during your three-month emo phase as a teen, and then never update it...you'll be embarrased by every part of it's apperance...

Anyway, made some updates! Switched my default picture, changed the theme, changed the name...

Looks a little nicer, in my opinion!

Jan. 24th, 2011

  • 11:48 AM
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Swiped this from [info]kaitou_syrie.

1. If you're on my friends list, I want to know 35 things about you. I don't care if we never talk, or if we already know everything about each other. Short and sweet is fine.

2. Comment here with your answers and repost the questionnaire on your own journal.

01) Are you currently in a serious relationship?
02) What was your dream growing up?
03) What talent do you wish you had?
04) If I bought you a drink what would it be?
05) Favorite vegetable?
06) What was the last book you read?
07) What zodiac sign are you?
08) Any Tattoos and/or Piercings? Explain where.
09) Worst Habit?
10) If you saw me walking down the street would you offer me a ride?
11) What is your favorite sport?
12) Do you have a Pessimistic or Optimistic attitude?
13) What would you do if you were stuck in an elevator with me?
14) Worst thing to ever happen to you?
15) Tell me one weird fact about you.
16) Do you have any pets?
17) What if I showed up at your house unexpectedly?
18) What was your first impression of me?
19) Do you think clowns are cute or scary?
20) If you could change one thing about how you look, what would it be?
21) Would you be my crime partner or my conscience?
22) What color eyes do you have?
23) Ever been arrested?
24) Bottle or can soda?
25) If you won $10,000 today, what would you do with it?
26) What's your favorite place to hang out at?
27) Do you believe in ghosts?
28) Favorite thing to do in your spare time?
29) Do you swear a lot?
30) Biggest pet peeve?
31) In one word, how would you describe yourself?
32) Do you believe/appreciate romance?
33) Favorite and least favorite food?
34) Do you believe in God?
35) Will you repost this so I can fill it out and do the same for you?

Bah, humbug...

  • Dec. 25th, 2010 at 2:36 PM
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I can' believe my last christmas post isn't even off the page...It's not like I don't have anything to say, I just can't be bothered to...wait, getting off topic...

Ah well...uh...Merry Christmas everyone, and Happy holidays!

A random Musing

  • Sep. 7th, 2010 at 2:42 AM
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Is it just me, or are the Pokemon Team names getting worse and worse?

I mean, sure, they weren't that great to begin iwth, but just hear me out...

First, there was Good Ol' Team Rocket, which i still love, even today (If I ever find a Pokemon BYOND game that isn't abandoned, I'm so gonna dedicate myself to Team Rocket on it...).
And then there was Magma and Aqua, the two opposing teams, which was a neat idea, Hell, even Galactic was pretty cool, despite the Bowlcuts.

However, in Pokemon Ranger...Team Go-Rock...
What the hell kinda name is that? Plus, why do they all look like the Super Nerd from the Original Games? Not really very imposing Nintendo...
Then, there was team Dim Sun...an okay name, but tell me the truth...you first read that as Dim Sim, didn't you? All coolness just vanishes in the blink of an eye.

And now, in the next Ranger game...The Pokemon Pinchers...Just Shoot me now...


Oh, also, why do you always live with your Mother in the games? Our character's only seen a father once over the whole series, so where the hell are they?
To counter this, I think Black & White should have you living with your Father...and maybe your Mother is part of the Elite Four!
It was cool having your Dad as a Gym Leader in R/S/E, so why not take it another step?

Anyway, that's it for my 2 AM musings, night!

I...I can never read Harry Potter again...

  • May. 1st, 2010 at 12:56 AM
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Okay, everyone here knows I love fanfics, right?
Well, I'm going to share something with you readers; Being the nice guy I am, I've always thought that even those who write bad fanfiction aren't necessarily bad writers, they just need some more practice, and that if they keep up with it, they can get good.

Then, during my daily trip to thatguywiththeglasses.com, I stumbled upon Sage's Fanfic Theatre, and after enjoying a good chuckle at some of the Fics he reads, (Especially when he tries to do the voices, though he does do a scarily good Spoony impression...) I discovered a Harry Potter fanfic on there called 'My Immortal'

Now, remember my words before about how there are no bad Fanfic writers?


I WAS FUCKING WRONG!!!


This is by far, the WORST piece of shit I have ever made the mistake of reading! It pisses all over the Harry Potter continuity, the OC's are blatant self-insertions, as well as Mary Sues, and the Characters are so far out of character, they're close to completly looping back around!
The story actively seems to promote Gothicness and Satanism (Which kinda makes sense as I'm pretty sure this could be the Anti-Bible...)
and even has the nerve to use Vampires all the fucking time! Vampires! Like they didn't get enough of a beating in the Twilight Saga, they're used here too?!!

Now, I'm sure you think I'm being a bit of an Asshole, and well, I probably am, but still, read the first part of this, and you TELL me I'm wrong!



Done? Yeah, it's REALLY bad...
Now, to be entirely honest, I don't think there are any Goth's in Kalgoorlie. (Not because we're smarter then that, hell no, but more because would you really want to wear all that Sun-Absorbing leather and black in a desert? You'd be found dead of heatstroke in less then a week!)
And the few I saw when I was in a City? They seemed okay, bit shady, but they never hurt anyone.

...After reading this, I swear, I am going to have to fight the urge to not kick the first Goth I see next time I'm in Perth in the balls, screaming something along the lines of 'THIS IS FOR HARRY POTTER, YOU BASTARD!'

...Actually, that would be worth getting arrested for, can you imagine the news headline?

Wait, crap, I'm getting off topic...anyway, simply put, this story is bad, it's terrible, it's horrific, If I ever ended up stepping into Silent Hill, all the Creatures and Puzzles would be ALL based off of this damn fiction from how much it has scarred my psyche!
And you know what? I haven't even watched the other three parts yet! And I'm gonna! Why? Because I'm just a glutton for punishment. Sy, in case I don't make it back, I want you to know you're my best friend, and that I love you.
Farewell cruel world, fareweeellllll...

...Wow...

  • Mar. 6th, 2010 at 2:13 PM
Hair Mechanix Robot Head


I have to say, after this song, I'm going to be keeping an eye out for more by this guy...

...guh...

  • Feb. 10th, 2010 at 9:54 PM
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Well, this has been a pretty depressing week...
Want to know why? Well, I'll start off small and work my way up to the big things...
First off, I played Star Trek Online, and being a huge trekkie, I was expectig something awesome...and I was sorely disappointed...
While in some ways, they have their Star Trek trivia down to a key, the gameplay is slow, and it really dosn't suck you in during when you start it, which is something it should be aiming for to keep you playing it!
Worst part about that was that I actually went and formatted my computer to fix a bug on it that was keeping me from playing it, because I was so certain it would be good.
Now I'm searching for drivers I'm missing, and other shit...

Also, some Sad News...our family Dog, Chelsea, passed away recently.
She's been very sick for Months, and my Mum and Dad had been talking about getting her put down for ages, but they decided to do it while I was at my Work Experience Job at Leading Edge Video, so I didn't even get to say goodbye.
Jeez...I can't remember a time we haven't had that Brainless Collie around...I'm gonna miss her...

I'm Back!

  • Jan. 26th, 2010 at 8:26 PM
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Well, I'm back from Wai-Con, and what a weekend it's been...
I wish I could show you some pictures, but nearly all of mine turned out crap, so I'm hoping my Brother has a few good ones taken that he'll send up to me...if so, I'll put them here for you to see along with the few of mine that were decent.
Otherwise, I need a rest...I'm choofed after this busy week...

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